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I'm not dead yet! In fact I've been thinking about updating the next part super fast after this part! And all because I finally have time to thanks to holidays!
It's been another month yet for some reason it felt longer. But not as long as this part. This has to be if not the
longest part ever at least one of the longest parts. For the first time in my life I have faced deviantART's size limit which is why I had to split the comic in two... I sense a lot of problems in the future...
The reason why this part is so long is simply the fact that I didn't know where to cut it + there was so much stuff I wanted to fit into chapter 13. I will try to make part three shorter, this is just ridiculous. :'D But at least you guys have a lot to read! I hope you don't find it boring.
Personally I don't like this part that much but I couldn't just leave it out because of the Team Aqua part which was kind of important. And now I'm not talking about the Archie photos. I...don't think I can even explain them.
I'm not sure if you found out anything new. I'm sorry for not explaining things but there is time and place for everything. At least you might've got some clues. :>
Oh, and before I cut the comments (I need to do that, too! Sheesh!) I must say I kind of like how Shelly turned out. I mean, she's annoying, interrupts everyone's speech and seems like a horrible diva. But I was actually afraid I couldn't give her any character at all so I'm glad that didn't happen, be the result annoying or not.
The second half of part two will be up soon!